...when it is all happening too fast.
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Rollercoaster
He has been leading
her from shop to
shop for hours!
She got new shoes
and also a manicure.
But most of the time,
he only dressed her up
and stripped her down,
again and again, just
like a puppet.
Dresses and bikinis,
tops, bras and lingerie -
she showcased them all
as his display dummy.
"Classy...", "Elegant!",
"Just beautiful!"
he commented as
he chose her new
wardrobe.
_
Now he is stuffing
all the shopping bags
into his sports car
while she waits on
the sidewalk.
She even still wears
that last flimsy piece
he has dressed her in -
and nothing else,
not even panties!
But at least this one is long
Now he is stuffing
all the shopping bags
into his sports car
while she waits on
the sidewalk.
She even still wears
that last flimsy piece
he has dressed her in -
and nothing else,
not even panties!
But at least this one is long
enough to not accidentally
flash her shaved pubes.
And stretchy enough for
those awfully big breasts.
She never thought they'd
She never thought they'd
be so huge that they render
her old wardrobe obsolete.
But now she's pondering
But now she's pondering
about her new clothes.
Which pieces might he have
Which pieces might he have
bought? Nothing too slutty,
nothing pink, she hopes...
...and almost jumps as he
...and almost jumps as he
suddenly takes her hand.
"Shopping for your balloons
"Shopping for your balloons
is hard work, Sweetie!"
He forwardly grabs a tit
He forwardly grabs a tit
and bounces it, in public!
"Let's have some fun
at the fairground!"
"But Ah can't even fee..."
she lisps with swollen lips.
"Let's have some fun
at the fairground!"
"But Ah can't even fee..."
she lisps with swollen lips.
"Can't stop looking at the
black side?" he chuckles.
"Just hold on to me!"
He picks up pace. She
"Just hold on to me!"
He picks up pace. She
clings to his hand, tottering
hastily in new stiletto heels,
trying not to let her jiggling
boobs slow her down.
"I'll buy you a lollypop and
"I'll buy you a lollypop and
show you round." he promises.
"And they say the roller-
coaster is so fast it makes
you lose your contact lenses!"
End
End
Really nice technique on the twist ending. Makes the reader go through the story twice, with 2 separate experiences. And I love the enforced reminder to her that they're out here shopping for a swath of gifts to bestow to his 2 new toys, not their silly display stand.
ReplyDeleteThanks! I really hoped for this double experience to work.
DeleteAnd, actually, despite the reminders, the groping, the wobbling of her boobs, she still is in denial about his objectifying agenda.