Hi everyone! Something unusual from me!
Years ago I have been writing some stories.
Some with illustrations, some without.
Some of them published in an old yahoo group.
Some never finished or shared.
Today, I want to share one of them here.
Completed, reworked.
Mail-Order-Bride.pdf on Google Drive
I'd be delighted to get some feedback!
P.S.: Be gentle, text and images are old.
Also, I'm no native english speaker.
Bravo! I like this. I also remember Cow Girls, which is one of my favourite ever stories. Please share more :D
ReplyDeleteCow Girls... my morphs from back then still looked creepy and weird. Maybe I'll have to update that story, too.
DeleteEspecially since I have a spin-off story about another cowgirl that is waiting to be completed. (But that one is without images anyway.)
I love the cow girls, I always wished there was just one more image featuring a bald tattoo'd head wearing a thick sturdy collar and cow bell hanging from the front.
DeleteNow I have uploaded Cow Girls here!
DeleteUnfortunately I don´t know any of your stories of that mentioned old site. Please reload them here, if you like in an upgraded version.
ReplyDeleteThat Mail Order Bride story was as great as most of your work. I don´t agree that the secretary was mousy, she even was beautiful before her transformation into that lovedoll bride. I recommend to create a special latex doll mask showing her former features, an unobtrusive way to show her in public and to let her remember to her past.
She was behaving like a mouse. Shy, didn't try to raise any attention. I Russia it is somewhat standard that women, especially young singles, care a lot about their looks.
DeleteYou'd be amazed how much makeup, what elegant and risky outfits and high heels you see in a usual commuter metro train in Moscow. Luda was never that ambitious.
Also I didn't want her mousiness to refer to her face, and I didn't intent to change her face to be unrecognizable. She is still looking like herself, just with bigger lips.
I hope to update my older stories soon, too, and want to publish them here. The prehistoric times of yahoo groups are long over.
I already was in Russia/Moscow and indeed, tough times for streetwhores there because you can see girls with the same look on a hotel reception
ReplyDeleteIf you see them waiting at a hotel reception, it might be that they are "escorts" :-P
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